yet better =)
sounds better if you see the entire song
but the main instrument is a bit to quiete I think but at the same time more intact as the other synth in your version I listened before if you could bring the synth of your version I listened before it would pretty great =)
further the beat playing at 1:22 isn't really in harmony with the song you shouldn't change it so much times =)
like in the end you should the song let end at 2:49 with the effect at 3:01
and still one thing is annoying me everytime the refrain comes in I hear a hashing one synth is responsible for it
if you would fix that the song were perfect for me =D
but I give you anyhow a 10 because of your efforts =)
greets sema
EDIT 2024: I dont understand my own comment and I wrote like an alcoholic