THIS IS REALLY AMAZING!!!!
Krussi I've never heard that bildup in NG especially the last 4 chords are very harmonic
I was so close on them but I never had get them =D
you should taper off the chords like exactly at 0:40 that's the perfect end for that bildup in the intro ... ok on this point I have seen that you made a remix (hearing remix) ok the bildup of MashedByMachines - Reamee is exactly what I mean =)
I think the drums and bass are in both not really fitting in yours is the position somehow wrong and in his is the chioce of the sound of bass not the best for the song ( I have problems with drums by myself everytime so I search for an artist who insert them xD you should do the same ;) ) his instruments are good but in 2:25 to repetitive your piano part is perfect and better as the original the piano instrument sounds very good it's well composed in sound and tact GREAT !
the rest of your choice of instruments are cool too
I hadn't decided for other myself
the mastering is clear all the time no distort (self by my cheap headphones ^^)
ok I could write hours long in bad english xD but the short way to mention my opinion to make the song better is
- use the chord bildup of Reamee
- insert new drums ( let decide an skilled artist =D because I would do it ;) )
- stay at your piano part =)
- and make the song LONGEEEEEER!!!! =D
if you want you can send me the project to my emailadress because my fingers cryin for a remix of the remix xD so I haven't do it alone and maybe our collab will be really great ;)
greetings Semaphore